Sunday, January 11, 2015

Blog Review on Rafaella's Blog Post

After spending this week reading multiple blog posts per night, one blog post that stood out to me more than the rest was Rafaella Spielberg's blog post on the book, The Great Gatsby by F. Scott Fitzgerald.  Over the summer I read this book and what interested me immediately about Rafaella’s blog post was her view on why Jay Gatsby’s perspective was not in the book.  Rafaella’s perspective of the author’s choice not to put Gatsby’s perspective in the book  was, “Jay Gatsby’s perspective is excluded to provide readers with a deeper understanding of the story.”  When I read this book, I hadn’t thought about it in the way that it provided the readers more depth in their understanding of what was going on in the book, but after I continued to read Rafaella’s piece, I totally understood what she was saying and why she thought that way.

One way that she did a good job at helping the reader of her blog understand what she was saying was by elaborating meaningfully about her points.  Elaborating is something that I struggle with and Rafaella’s blog post made it more clear to me about how I should elaborate to prove a point.  After every example that she gave, Rafaella elaborated with both her ideas and also more evidence.  This was really good because it made her point seem more valid.  Another thing that Rafaella did that I will try to do in the future to make my writing stronger is that she ended each paragraph by combining all the ideas that she mentioned throughout the paragraph while wrapping it with a really thoughtful sentence about the book.  Her craft and the way that the formulated her evidence and her paragraphs, was extremely strong.  Her technique of organization throughout the whole response made her ideas very clear to the reader.

As I was searching through many blogs to find one that stood out to me, it wasn’t just this one post that hooked me immediately on her page, but all of Rafaella’s posts were intriguing.  For a few minutes I just sat there looking through her posts and wondering what made them more interesting than a lot of other blogs that I had read.  Finally, I realized that her blog posts in general were more thought provoking than many other people’s blog posts.  Other people definitely did have very thought provoking posts, but many other peoples posts were just full of retell of what happened in the book.  Especially in her post for The Great Gatsby, Rafaella used a perfect amount of retell to get the reader to understand the main idea of what was going on in the book.

I agree with Rafaella that Jay Gatsby’s perspective was kept out of the book to give the reader a better understanding of the book, but I only started to agree with her after I read this post.  Even though she wasn’t technically arguing about something, her points and elaborations did a great job at adding towards her view about why Jay Gatsby’s argument was missing.  This post has actually really inspired me to start trying to prove my claim in a more in-depth way.


Sunday, January 4, 2015

Critical Analysis on "How Does It Feel To Be A Problem" by Moustafa Bayoumi

In the book How Does It Feel To Be A Problem by Moustafa Bayoumi,  Bayoumi tells different stories about experiences people have had due to being Arab in America.  He wants readers to know that racism doesn’t only happen between black people and white people, racism is a worldwide issue that every single human deals with on a daily basis.  He tells the reader this by teaching us that before 9/11, many Americans didn’t even acknowledge Muslim and Arab existence, but after the attack, our authorities started attacking them and arresting them, because they seemed “suspicious.  An example of this is when one of the characters, Rasha, is kicked out of her home with her family because of their race and religion.  They were put in jail for months and Rasha wasn’t even permitted to contact her friends or school to tell them where she was.  This proves that since 9/11, Arabs and Muslims have been treated like garbage and many Americans aren’t aware of this.

Bayoumi wants to teach readers about how unfairly all people can get treated because of their race or religion, and his goal is to get the reader to feel outraged at the authority system in America and how they are treating people because of their ethnic background and history.  One way that he proves how unfairly Arabs and Muslims get treated is by stating the most horrific facts about how these people got treated.  Bayoumi doesn’t waste his time talking about how Arabs get treated worse in restaurants, he talks about how many muslims got laid off from their jobs after 9/11 because of their race.  Another way that he makes the reader feel infuriated at the way Muslims and Arabs are treated is that he talks about what a big part of the population they are.  Bayoumi says that 20% of Americans are between the ages of 18 and 30, but 30% of ALL americans are Muslim.  By stating this fact, the reader feels like almost they have done something wrong.  There are more Muslims and Arabs in America than Young Adults and it just shows how many people have been affected by discrimination against race and religion.

Bayoumi did a really good job at getting the reader to feel strongly about the topic.  I came away from this book feeling like I needed to do something to make Arabs and Muslims get treated better.  I used to think that white privilege in America was white people getting treated better than black people but I was wrong.  I now know that racism and discrimination against people because of their race happens with every single race, including white.  

Sunday, December 14, 2014

Reading Response on "The Secret Life of Bees" by Sue Monk Kidd

            “The Secret Life of Bees,” by Sue Monk Kidd is a book that focuses on a white, 14 year old girl, Lily, who runs away from home with her black house-keeper, Rosaleen, in a time where racial segregation was still thriving. When Lily was as little as 5, she was standing in a room with her mother and father and holding her fathers gun while he was distracted by her mother. She fired the gun, killing her mother. She was left with her father who didn’t let her read and abused her physically and mentally. She felt trapped and the only person that looked out for her and cared about her was Rosaleen. To find out more about her mother and her mystery, Rosaleen and Lily fled to Tiburon, South Carolina, a place where Lily had found her mother had been. They randomly knocked on the door of August, May, and June Boatwright, black sisters who welcomed them into their lives as long as they worked for their honey business, tending to bees. Lily and Rosaleen have a different perspective on the world than the boatwright sisters because of their different lifetime experiences.
The lifetime experiences that Lily and Rosaleen share make them more naive than the boatwright sisters. One example of Lily and Rosaleen naivety is that they had hardly ever encountered racial segregation to an extreme level. When they got to the “Calendar sisters” house for the first time, they weren’t expecting someone to be unkind to a white person but, June was really uncomfortable with a white person staying in their house, therefore she was really unhappy and unkind to Lily especially. This was surprising to Lily because her race had never before made her the minority. She was used to being surrounded by white people so when she was treated differently because of her race, she felt guilty and also sympathized more with black people. Rosaleen was familiar with Racial segregation, but she wasn’t used to black people being superior. She took advantage of this by instead of taking care of Lily, she started to take care of May, the most troubled boatwright sister. Lily and Rosaleen were new to this way of getting treated, and this was changing the way that they looked at the world.
The Boatwright sisters are very different from Lily and Rosaleen, because they all have so many life experiences, and so much knowledge about the world and what is going on around them. The sisters aren’t resilient people, and not recovering from their many losses have given each of them the ability to comfort other people and make them feel like they are worth something. When they were little, May’s twin sister, April, committed suicide. Ever since, May has been having tantrums daily, and feeling the weight of the worlds problems. June and August have routinely made her feel better and calmed her down. Doing this has made August and June more sensitive people, and more capable of helping others emotionally. They have been through it all, none of them healing, but all of them working together to try to heal each other.
The Boatwright sisters knowledge of the world, and Lily and Rosaleen’s knowledge of the world made their time together different for all of them. Lily and Rosaleen were learning of a new culture and what really went on in the world. The Boatwright sisters knowledge and impulse to help others was important to Lily and Rosaleen, because it gave them an opportunity to both be informed of what was happening in America at that time, and do so in a safe environment where their presence was becoming more wanted every day. The different perspectives the Boatwright sisters and Lily and Rosaleen have on the world teach each group the lesson of kindness.

Sunday, November 30, 2014

Reading Response on "Reconstructing Amelia" by Kimberly McCreight

          The book Reconstructing Amelia by Kimberly McCreight is a frighteningly realistic book about a girl who deals with many societal issues.  The book is written logically, but out of order, going between Amelias perspective when she is still alive and her mother, Kates,  perspective once Amelia is dead.  Nobody knows if Amelia jumped of the roof of her school to kill herself or if someone pushed her.  By going through Amelias texts, emails, room, interviewing classmates and hiring a detective, Kate, unravels Amelia's life and what was truly going on inside her head.   Amelia deals with a crazy amount of societal issues everyday that are eating at her.

          One issue that Amelia is dealing with is bullying.  Amelia is bullied by many people including a club at her school that call themselves “the maggies”.  The maggies send her anonymous text messages saying terrible and mean things to her about her sexual preference and her family situation. .  Another example of Amelia being bullied is one of the maggies, Zadie, snuck into Amelias house and filmed her sleeping with Amelias girlfriend and sent it to the whole school.  This is an example of bullying because it ruined Amelias social status immediately.  This one person had a vulnerable moment on tape and sent it to the whole school in order to make Amelia feel upset.  People were giving Amelia looks and making Amelia feel unaccepted.

          Another societal issue that Amelia deals with is peer pressure.  The maggies are basically just a group that peer pressures girls into objectifying themselves and doing things that they would otherwise never do.  An example of something the maggies do to peer pressure people is they make people in the group post half naked pictures of themselves online.  No one has a choice and the maggies actually make it into a game.  Whoever gets the most likes on their picture wins.  This is an example of peer pressure because these girls are getting forced to put themselves on the internet and if they don't, their social status is ruined.  It is really terrible that in order to be cool at Amelias school, you have to reveal parts of yourself that may be uncomfortable to reveal.  When Amelia was chosen to join the maggies, although she didn't want to post these pictures online, she felt pressured to do it because she didn't know what was going to happen if she didnt.

          All in all, Amelia deals with many issues on an everyday basis that are making her feel uncomfortable and like she doesn’t belong.  Most teenagers also deal with issues like this, making them societal issues.  It has to do with our society and what makes our society so difficult for teens to live in.  These issues ruin many peoples lives, including Amelias.  Bullying and peer pressure can lead to depression and suicide.  Amelia died in this book due to the competition and bullying she faced and I can’t help to wonder how much better our society would be if everyone stopped adding to these issues, but not bullying and being nice.  I know that will never happen, but I think that societal issues are hurting kids more than some people may think.


Tuesday, November 18, 2014

YA Fiction Argument Essay

             What teenager wants to read about a land of cotton candy, kittens, and rainbows?  Many teenagers would not chose to read a book that speaks to this immature and superficial audience.  Instead, adolescents would rather read about the topics that they encounter on a day to day basis.  These topics include mental health, substance use, and relationships. As a result of the mature subject's being discussed, Young Adult (YA) books are a topic of great debate.  The authors are choosing to make their novels realistic and consistent with the lives of the individuals who are reading their books.  Many parents believe that if their children read these more intense books, their teens may feel inspired to act out in their lives what they are reading in the books. However, teens have a different idea about YA literature.  YA books of all kinds shouldn’t be limited or filtered in any way because they may actually help teens through the struggle of life.

            YA fiction has an enormous impact on teens because it makes them feel inspired and part of a community.  In the provoking article “Why the Best Kid’s Books are Written in Blood”  by Sherman Alexie, Alexie talks about a ceremony he talked at for kids in Seattle who had dealt with depression, abuse, homelessness, and self harm.  He says, “After the ceremony, many of the graduates shook my hand, hugged me, took photos with me, and asked me questions about my book or my life.  Other students hovered over the edges and eyed me with suspicion and/or shyness.”  This shows what a big affect Sherman Alexie’s story had on these children who had all dealt with very difficult issues in the past. He served as a role model for these students.  His book “The Absolutely True Diary of a Part Time Indian” also obviously had such a big impact on these teens because of the way that they were behaving around Alexie.  They were extremely interested in Alexie and they looked up to him so much that some were even too shy to to talk to him. It is clear that many students felt that reading his book provided companionship and hope.  In another article, “Teen fiction plots are darker and starker”  by William Porter, Porter quotes a college literature teacher, Jill Adams, “The genre has the ability to change with the times and it always seems to have a pulse on the teen heartbeat.  It reflects whatever’s going on in their lives.”  Jill Adams obviously understands that maturing teens have hard lives and that literature can help them deal with their struggles in the real world.  This genre has so many types of stories and subgenres that it can reflect everyone’s life.  According to Alexie, YA books “taught me how to battle the real monsters in my life.”  YA books leave a lasting mark on children.  Why would you take one of the only things that teens hold dear to them?

            Adolescents are exposed to mature subjects through many channels such as TV, internet, and movies.  Limiting YA books will not shield students from these topics because they are already witnessing them in their everyday lives.  In “Why the Best Kid’s Books are Written in Blood,” Alexie talks about how naive some adults are about kids’ actual experience.  He tells about how many of the grownups around were clueless.   He says, “They wanted to protect me from sex when I had already been raped.  They wanted to protect me from evil when a future serial killer had already abused me.  They wanted me to profess my love for God without considering that I was the grandchild of men and women who’d been sexually and physically abused by generations of clergy.  What was my immature, childish response to those would be saviors? ‘Wow, you are way, way too late.’”   Alexie’s experience shows that even without YA literature, he had already encountered many hardships. Many parents believe that they are simply protecting their kids when they are restricting their teens access to YA fiction, but they are just making their child’s life scarier.  Most parents don't know everything that is going on in their child's life or head, and books provide a safe space for children to learn about these topics and talk about them in their classrooms with teachers. Additionally, in the same article, Alexie talks about a 17 year old boy who wanted to be a writer, but his father wanted him to be a soldier, “He was seventeen and destined to join the military.  Yes, he was old enough to die and kill for his country.  And old enough to experience the infinite horrors of war.  But according to Ms. Gurdon, he might be too young to read a YA novel that vividly portrays those very same horrors.”  The boy that Alexie is talking about is the son of a millionaire.  This lets the reader know that no matter what your background or demographic is, everyone faces horrors that are almost too severe to picture. YA books are not contributing to children losing their innocence because it is already happening in their lives. Restricting access to YA books does not protect anyone, instead it may make them feel more lonely. YA books deal with normal issues that many teens have to deal with on a daily basis.  YA books with more horrific details and storylines won't damage kids and teens because they already deal with these injustices.

            In contrast to the many benefits of YA literature, some research points to the potential negative impact of YA books. This is the material that many parents cite and dwell on when speaking about YA novels. For example, in the article “Darkness Too Visible” by Meghan Cox Gurdon argues that reading YA fiction will harm adolescents’ natural wholesome state of mind.  Gurdon says, “It has to do with a child’s happiness, moral development and tenderness of heart.  Entertainment does not merely gratify taste, after all, but it creates it.”  Gurdon is trying to get the point across that if teens and children read YA fiction, they will turn into mean, bitter, and unhappy people.  She’s suggesting that children are better off if they’re happy.  But isn’t knowledge more important than happiness?  If you’re knowledgeable, than you have a more real foundation for happiness.  People need to have knowledge in order to have a purposeful life experience.  Reading about the experiences of others can give you knowledge and a more sophisticated view on the world.  If someone did not have YA books to read about others lives and experiences, they could be trapped in the naive bubble of only what they have seen.

            In conclusion, YA fiction is imperative to the healthy development of teens.  Although some parents object to the darker themes in this genre, without YA fiction, teens would feel like they are the only person in the world that is gay, cuts, or is depressed.  Additionally, they wouldn't know as much about the world.  Kids go through a ridiculous amount of disappointments, dramas, and struggles, and YA fiction can act as an escape.  Most importantly, young people come away from books feeling better about themselves and determined to read more.  I do not know one teen who hasn’t been through something heartwrenching, so where would they be without YA fiction there for them?

Sunday, November 16, 2014

Reading Response on "11 Birthdays" by Wendy Mass

          The book 11 Birthdays by Wendy Mass is about a girl named Amanda, a boy named Leo, their birthday and their friendship.  They aren't brother and sister, but because of the birthday they share, they have become so close that they have almost always thought of each other that way.  They had shared birthday parties year after year, but on their tenth birthday, they got into a fight, and became estranged.  By the time their eleventh birthday came along, they hadn't talked for a year and it was going to be the first birthday they spent apart from each other.  When they woke up the day after their birthday was over, it was their birthday all over again!  Amanda and Leo’s repeating eleventh birthday teaches them that friendship and love is more important than anyone would imagine.

          One way that their repeating birthdays teach Amanda and Leo about the importance of their friendship is that it smashes them together and makes them think as a team.  Since Leo and Amanda are the only ones that are experiencing this day over and over again, they basically have no choice but to join together in friendship.  They have to think together as a team in order to try to get their birthday to stop repeating itself.  For example, when they just become friends again and after they find out about the feud that their grandparents had with each other, they thought together and they came up with the plan to go to the Willow Falls Historical Society to find out if what ended their grandparents feud is a day repeating over and over again.  That was extremely smart because Leo’s their grandfathers journal was there, and so that led them to find out why the day was repeating and what they could do to make it stop.  Without their combined knowledge, neither of them would have thought to go to the Willow Falls Historical Society, which led them to a very important clue of how to get out of the day.

          Another way that Leo and Amanda’s birthdays teach them of the importance of friendship is that it makes them realize how hard it is to make lasting friendships and how easy it is to make them die.  What makes them realize this is the plant that they both had made together at their 5th birthday party.  They didn't know that the plant was keeping them safe from a spell that was in their families, that said that if Leo and Amanda didn't talk for a year, a year later the day would repeat over and over again, exactly what had happened to their grandparents.  When Leo and Amanda got into their fight, Amanda threw the plant out the window, and it shattered to pieces.  This symbolized how precious their friendship was and how easy precious friendships are to break, just like the plant.

          In conclusion,  throughout the course of this book, Amanda and Leo are forced to make up from their fight, and while  they are doing this, they realize the most important thing.   They realize just how important close friendships are, not only to the close friends themselves but it also affects the people around them.  By the time that Amanda and Leo realize this important information, they take it to heart and they rethink what they are doing with their lives and they learn how to be themselves.  This tells us that being with the right people and having love in our hearts is the key to having a happy and healthy life.

Tuesday, November 4, 2014

Critical Analysis on "Why the Best Kids Books Are Written in Blood" by Sherman Alexie

           In the article “Why the Best Kids Books Are Written in Blood” by Sherman Alexie, the author talks about how YA fiction, and darker books can help teens fight off the troubles and monsters in their own lives, so therefore YA books shouldn’t be banned or filtered in any way.  One example that Alexie gives is of a promotion ceremony he gave for a Seattle alternative high school.  There were 60 students who had all come from different and yet all difficult childhoods.  After reading Alexie’s autobiography, “The Absolutely True Diary of a Part-Time Indian”, this book meant so much to each of the students.  I had inspired them to find a better life for themselves.  Sherman Alexie then talks about how no matter what the demographic of the schools that he visits is, there is always students that have very difficult lives, and have been inspired by his book, and other pieces of YA fiction.  These examples show that kids always need inspiration, and without inspiration from books that include similar situations that they have been in, teens can’t fight off the monsters in their own life.

           Alexie is trying to tell adults that they have already done enough wrong to the teen community and the least they can do is let them read YA fiction that will help them along in life as well as persuading them not to limit the access of YA books.  He is trying to make them feel guilty and like what they are doing to their children by limiting their access to books is a terrible thing to do.  One way Alexie does this is by inserting an example of a millionaire’s son.  At first, he thought “What kind of pain could a millionaires child be suffering?”.  The teen then said that he wanted to be a writer but his father wanted him to be a soldier just like he was.  Then Alexie goes on to say that “he was old enough to die and kill for his country and old enough to experience the infinite horrors of war.  But according to Ms. Gurdon, he might to be young to read a YA novel that portrays those very same horrors”.  This makes the reader feel revolted.  You can’t protect someone from something they already have to deal with.  This makes adults feel guilty and teens feel heard.

           Alexie made some really good points in his article, that made me feel heard and understood.  Although all of my friends and I have grown up in a good and healthy environment for kids, I don’t know one person who hasn’t been through something rough or terrible.  I agree with Alexie in every way that YA novels shouldn’t be limited.  They have helped many of my friends and myself through difficult situations, and they have the ability of doing much more than adults.  When someone is going through something tough, adults say that they are there to talk, but YA fiction can do much more than talk, it can inspire and make kids feel like they are not alone.  This shows that books make people feel heard and understood, and the least adults can do is to not limit teens access to inspiration.